This poem... I can't tell you how long I have been fighting to pull this together. Night after night of hair ripping and frustration I have tried so hard to do this.. In the end I have finally done it. I have done what I have so longed to come up with. This poem.. I tried to make it based off of my other poem, winter poem ( fav.me/d6wuxaw ). I think.. I have finally done it.. It brings tears to my eyes on how much emotion this brings out in me. How well written it is done.. how..I was able to do it.. I would like to thank everyone who has patted my back as I cried on their shoulder over this.. thank you.. everyone..
Moving, heart-felt, and genuine. From the beginning a sense of tension, a dragged out presence of intense awareness, and as it progresses, the nature of the composition becomes more compressed, into the final culmination of a pure expression of inner truth. It IS hot. Fuck.
I think that you have truly captured the very essence of summer in a way that very few of us can. The style, the rhythm, and the emotion show behind every word and together form one of the most eloquent pieces of art I have ever come across. Thank you for writing this. I will never view my summers the same way again.